What are you trying to say?
What's your point?
What's your thesis?
Writers of expository essays often have difficulty
trying to define their key ideas, especially when the work is
assigned by others, whether teachers or bosses.
In contrast, the goals and purposes of ads are
usually simple and well defined: they promise benefits and seek
responses.
Ideally, the expository writer ought to have
an end purpose constantly in mind: What do you want to say? To
whom? What benefit does your audience receive?
Some expository writings (e.g. directions, instructions)
have obvious purpose and practical benefit: the reader learns
how to do something.
However, many writings do not have such an obvious,
immediate, or even a specific benefit, but may furnish the reader
with a general knowledge or a better understanding (e.g. of relationships,
parts, processes, causes and effects, history) which may provide
indirect or future benefits.
Composition textbooks usually suggest that writers
try to write their thesis
in one declarative sentence: straight, simple, clear and
direct, with no rhetorical questions, ambiguities, or figures
of speech.
Often, in the outline stage, writers work from
a few fragments or a few words jotted down. At some early point,
to clarify these vague ideas, it helps to predicate, by specifying
exactly, that something is or is not. It helps to
change from a "fragment outline" to a "topic sentence"
outline.
Useful exercise:
Imagine you're going to be interviewed on TV for a 30-second response
to answer the question, "What do you want to say?"
Prepare one clear declarative sentence.