Persuasion Analysis: Preparation Hints for Teachers


A site for teachers who see the need for a systematic analysis of persuasion, but lack the resources.

This page has some hints for teachers (Incorporate, Expand, Explain), some of my basic underlying Premises , some Goals, a few Classroom Ideas for younger students,and a brief word from Aristotle about potential abuses.

This is non-directive because I don't know your situation, your curriculum demands, nor your students. But. I considered three factors: Age / Experience of your students; Time Available; and In-class / Online.

A Consumer Education class -- or a middle-school English class -- might focus on current ads closely related to the students' own purchases.

A Consumer Education class -- or a middle school or high school English class --might want to use an alphabet-based teaching aid, "The ABCs of TV Ads,", a re-sorting (in 26 pages, each with 3-5 key ideas) of materials. This is designed for teachers who want to divide up classroom assignments into individuals or small teams. Some pages are harder, longer than others. If you're going to use this, browse first, so you can assign to students appropriate to their strengths.

A college course in Rhetoric or Persuasion might discuss the overall approach here in relation to Aristotle's logos, pathos, ethos; or compare this 5-part pattern of "the pitch" to the structure of the traditional Ciceronian classical oration, the AIDA formula, or to Monroe's Motivated Sequence.

A college freshman course (or H.S. Advanced Placement course) in Rhetoric & Composition might use a whole section A Companion to Composition which has 40 split-screen parallel pages of rhetorical principles: as seen in TV ads applied to student expository writing.

A journalism course mind find the 200 "Questions You Can Ask About Political Language" a useful investigative tool, especially the attention it gives to downplaying by means of omission, diversion, and confusion.

A political science course might want to test my claim in "Images and Issues" that all election rhetoric can be epitomized in one sentence: "I am competent and trustworthy; from me, you get more good and less bad."

A college course in Formal Logic might examine how many of the language tactics, traditionally presented in simple lists of "informal fallacies," are more coherently grouped within the Intensify/ Downplay schema, primarily as ways people downplay by means of omission, diversion, and confusion. Formal logic texts often dismiss, or prescriptively condemn, these as "fallacies" in rational argument (which they are) without pointing out, descriptively, that these are the most effective tactics of the nonrational persuasion we encounter today.

A high school class in Literature and Composition might want to focus on a "sense of structure" by comparing the tight, purposeful, underlying structure of a 30-second spot with that of a sonnet or a short story; or, discuss that 30-second spots are the"best compositions of our era." Or, examine the role of simple repetition and complex association. Or, because ads are so rich in "figures of speech," a Literature class might discuss the concept of "ads are the poetry of the corporation"

In Background, I narrate the original impetus as part of the NCTE Committee on Public Doublespeak and my development of the Intensify/Downplay Schema and the various Teaching Aids based on this taxonomy.

( Other ways of analyzing ads had existed: the most common being the Institute for Propaganda Analysis list of 7 ("Glittering Generalities, etc.) from the 1930s; later, most advertising textbooks mentioned the AIDA formula (attention-interest-desire-action), Monroe's "Motivated Sequence"; or much later, Donald Gunn's 12 Basic Formats. But, I found these all random and impressionistic, random and fragmentary. Because my own background was in classical rhetoric, my primary debt is to Cicero and Aristotle.

From feedback after release. I discovered that the scope of the whole Intensify/Downplay schema was so extensive that teachers didn't know where to start. Repetition, for example, is "so simple... so obvious... so self-evident" that it is seldom even discussed in texts. Association is an extemely important technique, but no one had as elegant a formula as I developed. (Test that claim!)

Eventually, because I observed that the most common structural pattern seen in commercial advertising (i.e.where it fits under Intensify / Composition / Structure) could be described in terms of a five part model which I labelled "the pitch" -- a term commonly and loosely used in sales, advertising, and Hollywood -- usually to describe an intense attempt to persuase others.

Then I created a useful mnemonic device, an elegant, low-tech 1-2-3-4-5 "fingertip formula" -- with cartoon balloons - as my recommendation as a good starting point, the easiest way for kids to learn in a sequential, coherent way, how to analyze ads by a focus on their structural pattern.

This is summarized in a one-page classroom passout: "The 30-Second-Spot Quiz." Over a hundred pages are available online "The Pitch" for explaining the details and illustrating the variations (such as the "soft sell,"in two editions of my book, and now on this website. Please read my Qualifications, Cautions, Caveats about using these simple tools.

Teachers can help "do something" about the current and future propaganda blitz. English teachers especially have a good opportunity because they are directly involved in language at all levels of our educational system.

However, in my opinion, many of the kinds of reformers I've observed in the past few years are not very useful, effective, or coherent. Let me oversimplify by pointing out some "types": Potshotters, Assassins, Single-Issue People, Ivory-Tower Dwellers, Preachers, Puritans, Rousseauists, Luddites, and Cuddlers

Or, read the whole essay: "The Teacher-Heal-Thyself Myth."


Hints: Incorporate, Expand, Explain

Incorporate

Usually, the first problem teachers face is where to incorporate these concepts into an existing, crowded curriculum. This website has a lot of material (500+ linked pages), but you'll be limited by your own time constraints.
A print-out of the one-page teaching aid "The 30-Second-Spot Quiz" -- with its simple 1-2-3-4-5 "fingertip formula" -- might be a practical starting point for all students, all levels, to get a quick introduction to ads as "units of persuasion." This basic structural pattern is easy to see, but teachers of younger students may need to help explain some of the qualifiers: for example, about "multiplicity and simultaneity," or "soft sell," or "image-building." See the section about The Pitch for details concerning content.

Many of the 20 teaching aids are designed for one-page classroom print-outs.

For useful hints about the process of how to analyze ads, see Suggestions.

For a rationale, see "Why Analyze Ads?"


Why is there so little attention to persuasion analysis in the schools?

There's no conspiracy (to produce passive consumers and citizens), but it is an unintended consequence, a side-effect, of the many curriculum wars and academic fads. Music, art, and the humanities are also affected by muddled curriculum goals, budget crises, standardized tests, and established interest groups each seeking more time and money.

If I were king....
I'd design a language curriculum with both practical goals (including the composition of expository writing as a useful job skill and the analysis of persuasion as an important skill for citizens and consumers); and liberal goals including "intellectual excellence" (Cardinal Newman's term, in The Idea of a University), personal enrichment and enjoyment of our culture's great literary and artistic inheritance.

Realistically, however...
Instead of trying to change curriculum, I've created a lot of little teaching aids (and now this website) which can be used now, within existing courses, by those teachers who are willing and able, who share with me the belief that more can be done to teach about the patterns and techniques of contemporary persuasion.


Telling Tales out of School

During my 40 year teaching career, I taught "Rhetoric & Comp" many, many times and was active in various professional groups related to composition studies (NCTE, CCCC, SCA, Rhetoric Society) and Consumer Education.

Illinois is one of the two states which requires "Consumer Education" courses in high school. I speak from my own experience as a parent (my 4 kids thought their experience was a "waste of time" in a chaotic, ill-taught course) and as a member of the Illinois Consumer Education group, which I saw as being divided into thirds: the "Home Ec" types (cooking, sewing); the "Business" types, eager to use the free materials prepared by corporate interests (banks, credit cards); and the "Consumerist" types, often fervently -- and randomly -- attacking advertising and corporate abuses.

Alas, no one was doing the systematic rhetorical approach which I call persuasion analysis. Even the "Speech" departments (and SCA) were so Balkanized that very few teachers ever looked at ads as "units of persuasion."

In high schools English courses, less than 10% (in an EJ survey) discussed advertising, and those that did either used the old 1937 IPA "list" ("glittering generalities...") or did random creative writing exercises.("Let's write an ad!") Even fewer high school teachers formally discussed political language, albeit some used the podium as a partisan pulpit.

I thought the best chance to get a wide audience was to write teaching aids directed at the universally-taught college "freshman comp" course. Teachers there often had freedom to incorporate some "Persuasion Analysis" within into their own syllabus. Thus, I first focused attention there.

Not all composition teachers will want to use this approach. At a CCCC convention debate once, after I opened my speech with the attention-getting claim that 30-second spots "are the best compositions of our era," my enraged respondent retorted "You call that the best we can do? They're nothing but pap and crap!"

The audience cheered their concurrence with him. After a great deal of enthusiastic venting by the audience, personal narratives about "bad" ads (vulgar, immoral, sexist, racist, materialistic, etc.) they disliked, I was never quite able, in my remaining few minutes, to get the focus back on the analysis of form, not content.

(I learned several lessons: people hear what they want to hear; an effective "attention-getter" does not always win the day; humorous diversions are very effective; my opponent had the empathy of the audience: he had put their vague feelings into words, he was "on their side." )

Despite the general lack of enthusiasm by my colleagues, I still my old opinion keep: all students need more systematic training in such analysis. This has been my academic "hobby" carried on over 30 years: I never quit my day job. When I started, I wanted to hit a home run: make a major change in the curriculum. Never did. But, whenever I got discouraged, I looked over this work and realized that there a lot of solid singles.

Cautionary

Alas, it is risky to teach about ads and advertising because students have such a vast pent-up reservoir of examples, feelings, and opinions -- just waiting to be expressed. You ought to anticipate this enthusiasm for the subject, and the chaotic randomness of an open discussion, and be prepared for it.

For more, read the introduction for college composition teachers and the specific classroom ideas.

Analyzing political persuasion can also be a "hot potato" issue if done by zealots and partisans: e.g. attacking all advertising, or scrutinizing only one political party, or one side in social issues.

Even some of my college students, for example, who easily dealt with the patterns of commercial advertising, would get upset when we studied the predictable patterns of cause group rhetoric. They were uncomfortable when I pointed out that both their favorite cause -- and its opponent --used the same techniques and patterns of persuasion.

In a free society, we should expect (and appreciate) many different persuaders, commercial and political.

Teachers can be be interested both in developing smart shoppers, informed consumers (very pragmatic, useful skills for the individual), and also in developing citizens who are more adept at analyzing persuasion from any source.

Analyzing ads is the easiest way to start learning about all persuasion techniques.

Other persuasion (political, social, religious) is harder to analyze because the subjects are more complex, the emotional issues are more involving, and we experience them in bits and fragments -- in headlines, TV news, in random discussions -- usually filtered or edited by others.

Ads, however, are usually seen in carefully crafted packages (30-second-spots on TV; in print, on pages) with coherent messages, involving simple transactions ("buy this"). Many rhetorical concepts learned here can be applied to other persuaders; but, first, analyze ads.


Expand

Download what is useful and appropriate for your students. If students have computer access, create online assignments for individuals or small groups

This is a bare-bones site. Although this site is rich in content, it's poor in glitz and graphics. Every page here could use -- should have -- more graphics -- magazine ads, animations, and more links to 30-second spots online as examples. (Alas, if I had world enough and time....)

But, you can add these by using a good search engine ( google.com - or ask.com) to find relevant, current examples. For example, note the usefulness of their News section which provides daily reports ("News Alerts") for the search terms you supply (e.g. kids and advertising). New RSS technology will help.

Check standard souces: NCTE , for example, occasionally still publishes articles (e.g. "Doublespeak Detection in the English Classroom") written by members of their Doublespeak Committee. For books, I suggest amazon.com because their Product Description pages are a good quick way to get a variety of both editorial reviews and reader reactions.

Recognize that these concise classroom pass-outs, the teaching aids ("Suggestions: How to Analyze Ads," "Suggestions: Why Analyze Ads," "The Intensify/Downplay Schema," "Questions You Can Ask About Ads," "What's Wrong with Advertising?") are basically collections of tight topic sentences, prompting many ways for you to unpack them, many options for you to elaborate.

For most of these teaching aids, I tried to fit (cram?) as much as I could on one page so they could be easily downloaded and cheaply reprinted. (Until I get them into PDF, try revising font size
in the printing process.)

Recognize that the Intensify/Downplay schema (and the related 400 prompter questions) is a very large comprehensive taxonomy, dealing with both verbal and nonverbal techniques. The Intensify/Downplay schema is too massive to try to use all the details of it; but, it's meant to give an overview of the big picture, so you can see where the parts relate to each other and the whole.

Furthermore, links within this site will lead you to rich and diverse places. For example, if you haven't read James Twitchell on advertising, I've included samples from his insightful and delightful writings. Enjoy!


Explain

I've tried to simplify without "dumbing down," to clarify by using appositions, and to eliminate jargon.

But, my prose is still beyond the grasp of younger students. Help them. Paraphrase. Increase their vocabulary. Teachers need to adapt these ideas to their particular audience.

Whether in 7th grade or graduate school, very few students have had any systematic instruction about ads as being "units of persuasion."

Kids see 100,000 ads before they reach 1st grade. Pre-schoolers can't even distinguish reality from fantasy, or programs from commercials. Granted, at some point, kids know that ads are "trying to sell you something."

But, they are still incredibly innocent or naive about the nonrational and indirect means of persuasion. Junior high school kids, wearing designer jeans and expensive athletic shoes, will sincerely say that "I'm not affected by ads."

Roy Fox's research interviews (in Harvesting Minds ) of elementary school students confirmed that

"students seemed oblivious to the likelihood that any external people were involved in making or telling this story. Kids saw no human being behind the message, no mediator calling the shots from the outside. Kids were very aware of the commercial's internal narrative, but they seemed oblivious about its external story -- the who, what, where, when, why, and how of the ad's construction."

After this childhood innocence, do the high schools and colleges have any effect on teaching citizens how to understand the basic techniques of persuasion?

Alas, I don't think so. In annual surveys, 75-80% of adults respond: "advertising doesn't affect me."


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Sports Analogy

If you were to try to explain the complexities of American football to a visiting foreigner, you might start with a general overview, the big picture, answering the basic WWWWW&H questions: Who (Who plays, watches, coaches... e.g. usually males, strong. fast, specific players, etc.); Why (fun, sport, recreation, prestige, money, etc.); When (e.g. Autumn, weekends, after-school); Where (sandlots to stadiums); What (rules and regulations); How (techniques). Some of these would seem simple, obvious, and easy to explain; others, more difficult -- such as techniques. So also, many things about advertising (and political persuasion) seem so obvious because we constantly see ads and politicians on TV. But some things, such as techniques, are more difficult to explain and to learn. It may help to use a useful, sports analogy (which moves from the known to the unknown)

To better understand American football techniques, the observer must first know the general patterns before the specifics In football, for example, the basic concepts of Offense/Defense; then, in descending sub-categories, in Offense, Run or Pass; then, Run Through Middle / Around End; Pass (Long or Short).

After such basics, it helps to know the common plays ("bread-and-butter" plays) and common situations (1st & 10; 3rd & Long), before the less-common plays: the variations, the unusual, the less predictable, or the more complex (double reverse, end-around, fake punts, Hail Mary pass, goal-line stand).

Yet. even after knowing all this, some observers, some TV commentators, are better than others, or focus on different things. Furthermore, every game has a different mix of players and situations.

Apply this analogy to analyzing persuasion techniques starting with the Intensify/Downplay schema. You might as well enjoy analyzing ads, because you'll have plenty of opportunities!

First grasp some of the general concepts that we intensify and downplay elements, then those two categories are each sub-divided by the common ways, the techniques, by which we intensify (by repetition, association, composition) and downplay (by omission, diversion, confusion). Notice that, in the "Questions You can Ask about Advertising.... & "Questions You Can Ask about Political Rhetoric") over 400 very specific "prompter questions" are presented to show relationships.

Yet, even many of these common variations are often fairly abstract ideas for most younger students. For example, most of the traditional names for the "informal fallacies" (ad hominem, ad populem, ad misericordium, etc.) are clustered here under "Diversion," treated as side-issue, diverting attention from the main issue.

Within the "Composition" section, I've called two common structures as the Pitch (most ads: the easiest way to start teaching analysis of techniques) and the Pep Talk (some political messages, often intensely emotional -- Leave it alone for a while). After students get used to analyzing parts of a typical ad, then tie that in with some ideas of our own Benefir-Seeking Behaviors, followed by the predictable Benefit-Promising Behaviors of the persuaders.

Nobody is going to be able to grasp the whole "game" at once, the first time you see it, because so many things are going on simultaneously. Even after knowing all this, some observers, some analysts, are going to be better than others, or focus on different things, plus every persuasive message has a different mix of players and situations. There's a lot more specific advice available in "Suggestions: How to Analyze Ads" and "Why Analyze Ads?"


Premises

Confusion and misunderstandings often occur when people do not explicitly state their underlying assumptions and their unspoken basic premises. Here's a brief list of some of mine. You need not agree with some of these premises. But, if you know where I start, it may help clarify some issues:

Ads are "units of persuasion."

Persuasion is a transaction.

Ads are the best compositions of our era.

Advertising is not coercion.

Advertising is about choices.

Choices and consequences can be good or harmful.

Advertising is not about "basics" nor "simple pleasures ."

Persuasion is universal.

Everyone knows all of this: it's just "common sense."

An imbalance is growing between "professional persuaders" and the average person.

Education is needed to counter-balance this inequality.

Legislation is needed to counter-balance this inequality.



Goals
This site will help students understand the rhetorical concepts of:

 

- deep structure, the superstructure, underneath the surface details of ads

- persuasion as a transaction: benefits sought, benefits promised

- the association techniques -- nonrational and nonverbal

- variations: direct/indirect; explicit/implicit; assertions/suggestions

- strategies and techniques of omission, diversion, and confusion

- the "outside maker" of the story, of the ad

- the idea of a specific target audience

- "bad" consequences both immediate and delayed


Can the knowledge about the techniques of persuation be misused?

Over 2,500 years ago, in the opening of his “Rhetoric,” Aristotle defended his descriptive observations about the effective techniques of persuasion, about what effective persuaders actually do, even though some students may misuse his teaching for bad purposes:

“And if it be objected that one who uses such power of speech unjustly might do great harm, that is a charge which may be made in common against all good things except virtue, and above all against the things that are most useful, as strength, health, wealth, generalship. A man can confer the greatest of benefits by a right use of these, and inflict the greatest of injuries by using them wrongly. “

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